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Title: Will I have no hands to hold ?
Post by: Girlinside on June 10, 2019, 11:50:02 AM
This was written after watching the champagne supernova video by oasis

Will I have no hands to hold ?

Will you come looking for me , when I go missing ?
or will you still be listening to oasis ?
will they still be taking you to places , that I can't ?
and I will I have to wander lonely, like an orphan
with no hands to hold

Chorus
Will I have no hands to hold ?
When I grow older and older
and will I have no shoulders to lean on
to help me keep clean from my demons

will I walk along the beach , by myself at dusk ?
and wish I'd never put my trust in another's heart
and wish I'd never met your eye at some party
I didn't even want to go to

Chorus
Will I have no hands to hold ?
When I grow older and older
and will I have no shoulders to lean on
to help me keep clean from my demons

Will I pick up stones on the golden sand
and listen and feel the sadness as they hit the waves
and walk up the beach knowing I've left someone behind
Will I cry or just go cold at your name ?

Chorus
Will I have no hands to hold ?
When I grow older and older
and will I have no shoulders to lean on
 .to help me keep clean from my demons

Will I have no hands to hold ?
When I gronw older and older  ?

Title: Re: Will I have no hands to hold ?
Post by: Dogmax on June 10, 2019, 11:01:30 PM
Hi Girlinside another good lyric but on thoughts on first verse leave out Oasis, write where the flow goes   8)

Will you come looking for me , when I go missing ?
or will you still be listening  ?
will your thoughts be taking you to places , that I can't ?
will I have to wander lonely, like an orphan
with no hands to hold
Title: Re: Will I have no hands to hold ?
Post by: Girlinside on June 13, 2019, 12:52:25 AM
Thanks Pat will take note