Just trying to write something short and catchy a la 4 Seasons back in the day.
Well I think it's short - not sure about catchy?
Oh I almost forgot to post the lyrics (that's a joke
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Gotta teach the drummer a few more rolls - any other feedback would be appreciated.
https://soundcloud.com/paulcanuck/amnesiaAmnesiaThe doctor said "Give her time"
"There's no reason or rhyme"
But how long do I have to wait?
I've tried to be strong,
But I'm ready to break
Amnesia
Did you get on a bus?
Amnesia
Did you forget about us?
Amnesia
Amnesia
Come home
There in that hospital bed
You were mistaken for dead
Then you woke up to my worried eyes
But there was no-one behind them
That you recognized
Amnesia
Did you hop on a train?
Amnesia
Have you forgotten your name?
Amnesia
Amnesia
Come home
Come home
Who is this other woman I'm speaking to?
And how did the love we have disappear from view?
Are we through?
Amnesia
Did you leave on a plane?
Amnesia
Can't you see I'm in pain?
Amnesia
Come home