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Title: Same Old Thing - Blues/Grunge Song
Post by: jonlint on April 30, 2018, 03:16:07 PM

Hi all,

Having a productive song writing holiday weekend!  Here is 2nd song written this weekend.  2nd verse pending, but feedback welcome on what I have so far:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/same-old-thing

SAME OLD THING
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

Every time
The same old story
You promise
Better things
Fresh ideas
And fresh money
The fat lady
Starts to sing

When did it change
Or was it a soul exchange
All that I know, is
The more things change
It’s same old thing

Title: Re: Same Old Thing - Blues/Grunge Song
Post by: jonlint on April 30, 2018, 04:13:58 PM

2nd verse added and some tweeks made:

https://soundcloud.com/jonathan-linton-3/same-old-thing-v2

SAME OLD THING
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
Every time
The same old story
You promise
Better things
Fresh ideas
And fresh money
The fat lady
Starts to sing

When did it change
Or was it a soul exchange
All that I know, is
The more things change
It’s same old thing

Every time
The same old story
You promise
Better things
Fresh ideas
And fresh money
The fat lady
Starts to sing

I’m so tired
Of your fumblin’
It bites like
A bee sting
Solution
To the problem
Get rid of everything