I like this.
Pop rock. Those phrases on the verse are great.
“Just as I started”. “Beginning to move“ is another I really like.
There’s this immediacy n passion
That
@pompeyjazz so easily pulls off.
Great rocky production
Stil, it is undeveloped
Hope you don’t mind me saying
It starts too early with repetition.
Ironically there is a stalling in the story.
I really enjoyed the first 2 minutes
“Ok, I’m on board, let’s go” “oh, we’ve already arrived”
Sometimes your wild excursions are just too short, not short but unfinished.
Maybe I’m too slow.
But I think you’ve so much to offer but you’re so rushed.
My advice. Give up the day job, get an amazing set list together with classy, committed musicians n hit the road. Perfecting those wild man songs.
As if Tyson gets in the ring against a tough guy.
After two explosively effective rounds
Competition dismayed at the revelation he never had anything to offer, he’s about to crumble. Suddenly, he’s told Tyson has gone for a drive. Lol.
In a word... behave yourself.
Respectfully, rightly