First of all, congrats on sharing song of the month for May. There were some great tunes to choose from so well done.
Second, I've not read all the comments here (I've barely glanced over it) so if I'm chewing on old rope please forgive me.
Overall it's another great song - really catchy (one of my points actually pertains to this) and well produced (to my ear).
One thing I've noted that was picked up on was a small thing but my lyricist's ear definitely picked up on it (every time I hear it - and I've heard it more than a few times). It was the word "thee". I really think it would sound better as "you" - I really do think you can get away with it without having to worry about it not rhyming. A number of bands I listen to get away with it all the time. As a lyricist though I do find myself guilty of mangling the English language to squeeze out a rhyme so possibly I'm guilty of double standards here!
The other thing is a slight negative, although it's in the nature of there was something I wanted more of. And that was this part:
You hit me like an uptown bus in New York City
Like the first time I had 10 shots of whiskey
Just like the time I jumped out of an airplane into the sky
And I fell like a piano coming down from the 40th story
Rome when the Barbarians came for the glory
The first time i heard Coldplay "Fix You" and I cried
This was my favourite part of the song (caught me doing my dad-dancing moves) and I felt a slight disappointment there wasn't more of it later in the son (either with the same lyrics or different). The lyrics are so good here and the faster tempo really gets the song going.
Yeah, I know. Too much of a good thing is bad for me (my doc keeps on telling me every time he tries to make changes to my diet). But, meh. It's still pretty damn good as it is.
Keep 'em coming!