Hi Rightly, I definitely like the more melodic side of this one. The backing is very accomplished too - the strings and organ (and drums) really work well.
I'd agree that this does sound like a first vocal take and that the next vocal take might be "the one" - but then maybe the 50th practised take would also lose something so who knows.
Love that "turn my screw... come undone" line. It's a cool song.
@PaulyX @irwin @adamfarr Thanks for your comments
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Due to peer group pressure I’m going to have to give up the struggle and agree
The vocal is a first take, and the Song newish.
This would account for the roughness.
Still a little voice is saying
Ah leave it alone
It’s off balance as is the theme of the song, ...
Are you not going to let me get away with it?
My reasoning here is fairly coherent. Lol.
Good bless yous
I’m going shopping! (Literally).