[Mr.Chainsaw]

Hey all

Not posted in 6 months or so. Been away for a while

This song has music already but I'm currently 8 timezones away from my Rode Mic *sob*


Time Before (Time Enough)

 Verse

Her fickle heart was beating
Bounced right off the ceiling
And landed in my bed
How easily we are led

Her mother was a banshee
Screamed of slights you can't see
And swore the world was wrong
A trait that she passed on

Chorus

Beneath your granite skies
It's hard to have soft thoughts
And I've forgiven quite a lot
But that time before, was time enough

Verse

Step upto the mirror
What is it that you see?
Someone you'd call a friend, or a child
Living beyond their means?

You say that it was nothing;
It meant something to me
But you spun me around, you let me down
You made a world class fool out of me

Chorus

Beneath your granite skies
It's hard to have soft thoughts
And I've put up with a lot
But that time before, was time enough

Bridge

So you ask me
"why are you laughing?"
Well honey,
It sure as shit ain't sad

You scream at me
Why should I listen?
Cos I've put up with a lot
But that time before, was time enough

Outro

Her fickle heart was beating
A shudder while you're dreaming
Will you admit you're wrong?
When you wake up, and realise

I have gone


Cheers all

Peter

[Stylus]

Hi  Peter
               Her mother was a banshee!  he,he,he    ' I sure as shit aint sad '  Two great lines & the rest of the song is very well written.Look forwards to hearing it one day       Regards  Stylus 

[Jess]

The rhymes are really slick and flow really nicely- verse 1 and the chorus are especially strong. would love to hear this to music

[Lyrycalsoulz]

I liked it its just for me long songs well they tend to have a habit of being.. long lol haha lyrics though i liked the chorus  and about the granite skies and then contrastin it with not bein able t have soft thoughts nicely done

[Saeed AlSuri]

Hi Mr.Chainsaw ..

Do you have music put to the lyrics .. so I we could hear it .. rather then read it only .. ??