First recording I've ever done, so would like some constructive criticism please
I know the sound quality is awful, and my vocals kind of suck here - I'm not normally that bad but ah well :p
I'm open to any comments you could have on what I could add to this, as at the moment it's a pretty boring guitar chord progression
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Here are lyrics:
Verse 1
I heard he messed with your head
Chose somebody else instead
I heard he wasted your time
The time for loving, turned out that you're being mislead
Verse 2
I heard he messed with your mind
You took a knife in the back from behind
I heard you're not want he wants your
not what he needs so he left you alone to just die
Pre Chorus
But I ain't like that I'll help you fight back
I'll give you all that you need
Chorus
Cause I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on and let me through
Now tell me that you want me too
I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on let me through
And tell me that you want me too
Verse 2
I heard he messed with your soul
Left you alone in a hole
I heard he threw you to the start
from tip to toe, your body is cold, took the love out of your heart
Verse 3
I heard he messed with your personality
he tried to make you see your darker side
Pre Chorus
But I ain't like that, I'll help you fight back
I'll give you all that you need
Bridge
Because I heard he messed with your heart
I heard that he tore you apart
And now listen to me, a cup of tea if you're willing to try and restart
Chorus
Cause I wanna be with you
I wanna see like you
So come on and let me through
Now tell me that you want me too