New song. Very pop. Very cheesy. But I still kind of like it. Here's a link to a very rough recording. Please note VERY rough.
https://soundcloud.com/exfairy/cinema-tonight/s-kec1FI'd love advice on lyrics, structure, chords, melody etc, maybe some ideas of instrumentation or recording things but I do know that this is a crap recording of it - you don't need to tell me. It's a WiP.
Also in the lyrics I've been toying with some alternate words in the chorus that I'm not sure which to use. I've put the ones I don't sing in brackets.
Lyrics:
Hey you, I know that this is strange but
I had the best time at the cinema tonight.
And I-i-i-i was wo-on-de-ring whether you want to do it again?
How about you and me make a routine watching the big screen?
With popcorn in hand, do you like my plan?
Cos I was so surprised
When I saw (caught) your eyes
And you said I looked pretty
Now I've got butterflies
As I look up to the sky
At the cinema tonight
We go to see a brand new action movie
Cos you know rom coms aren't my thing
And horror makes you jump right out of your skin
And we-e-e-e both di-id see the first film of the series
The thing in common's there and I think you care
Would be be a good pair?
Cos I was so surprised
When I saw (caught) your eyes
And you said I looked pretty
Now I've got butterflies
As I improvise
At the cinema tonight
As the credits roll, my heart is in freefall
Until my hand you hold
The night's turned to gold
Cos I was so surprised
When I saw (caught) your eyes
And you said I looked pretty
Now I've got butterflies
As we say (kiss) goodbye
At the cinema tonight