Hi everyone, and many thanks for all your feedback and comments.
I've tidied it up a lot - changed the drum set (thanks SlavB) and toned down the breaks, strings are there with an 80's China Crisis feel (thanks Sandeep), remixed the vocals down (thanks Jack), had a good look at the strumming of the guitar which was fighting the rhythm (ta Jamie and Skub!) and tightened that. And thanks Yoda, Johnny and CPM for comments and encouragement. (The Soundcloud photo is from the home of a drummer friend - suitably detached!!)
It's my first forum collaboration, and I feel all of your feedback has made it a collaboration not just of me and Katie, but everyone who commented, so many thanks!
https://soundcloud.com/dasntn/dont-look-for-revenge-final-versionHopefully this is the final version!
Dave