[Dogmax]

Just get the piano right and this would be beautiful.

Then the stage door will open, im not going to say anymore      

[crystalsuzy]

Ahhhh...here's that beautiful hypnotic voice again ...I don't really care what else is in the song, just turn up those vocals and let them soar
I love the intro with the piano line ...but I think I would be more sparing with it through the verses
I love that you are experimenting with different garage band instruments Alexander, and as much as I love real horns, I'd ditch them in this unless you just use them for shots here and there to build and emphasize certain parts...but it's only my humble opinion
You have a very unique way of writing and presenting your songs which I think is awesome...keep them coming friend CS

[mellowman]

Hi,

your attitude is clear. We guess we all want a better world and your lyrics are yearning for this. Maybe you should take more care while inventing a melody. It is not decisive enough to our ears. And do you think you can enhance the hook-line a bit ? Would give the song a better shape.

Keep on going !

Cheers

[fischermans]

Hello
@Dogmax
Thank you.In the moment I have a lot of other projects but will work on that song again and try to make a better timing for the instruments and sparing them a bit.
@CS
Thanks for your  kisses Have you thought about our marriage??
For the instruments most of the time I´m not sure if I like the bandversion more than the version with only guitar.
@mellowman
Thanks for your comment.May be I can make a better melody in my next song.
Regards Alexander

[Boydie]

I am definitely feeling this one

As you admit the "off timing" has spoilt it a little - although there is definitely a quirky charm to the track that did start to grow on me!

I would love to hear what DB does to one of your tracks  - that could be an interesting collab

[fischermans]

Hello Boydie
Thanks for your words. There will be a collab with DB on another song.
Alexander