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Daylight Dreamer
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mstesson
Busker
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Daylight Dreamer
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April 26, 2024, 03:23:36 PM »
Hi all,
Swedish amateur songwriter here.
I just finished a new demo:
Would appreciate some constructive feedback. Thank you all!
Regards
Stefan
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mstesson
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Re: Daylight Dreamer
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April 27, 2024, 12:48:18 PM »
The song is about a girl that is daydreaming and hoping for having success in life.
English is not my native language so would appreciate feedback on the lyrics also. (Lyrics is in the song description on soundboard)
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Elvis Nash
Solo Gig
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Re: Daylight Dreamer
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April 27, 2024, 04:30:56 PM »
Låter bra man, har en riktigt bra känsla för det
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mstesson
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Re: Daylight Dreamer
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April 30, 2024, 12:11:05 PM »
Tack!
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ChrisPrice
Platinum Album
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Re: Daylight Dreamer
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May 01, 2024, 11:59:29 PM »
Sounds good to me. Not really my genre but everything fits as it should. it has an 80's feel to it. Nothing wrong with that. I enjoyed this
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