I like this a lot - vocals and guitars are great. Lyrics are very interesting - and though you explained the meaning behind the song I still didn't get most of the lyrics, and can thus understand why live it might make a few people scratch their heads. But then, many many songs have such lyrics. Great rhythm and feel, too. Well done. Going back for another listen now.
Thanks Oldbutyet!!
And thanks Delboy!!
It's still strange for me to get positive feedback from more talented folk.
it's very encouraging.
I don't mind folk scratching their heads after a performance.
I think, for me, the best songs don't always make perfect (or direct) sense to the concious mind.
For me a good song will leave plenty room for the listeners own interpretation, the song is personalised this way and thus becomes stronger.
Performances of this song do actually work quite well. Listeners will sense something happening, something of substance and mystery.
A more direct song, dynamic and passionately performed can follow, and Bob's your Uncle.
My best songs haven't been written yet. (But they're still mine. lol.)
Feedback from this site is positively effective.