Hello everybody,
I'm new here.
Here's a song I have made for my band Moonshine Company (
https://www.facebook.com/moonshinecompany).
https://soundcloud.com/moonshine-company/wild-girl/s-3p5eLIf you would kindly (!) tell me how sh*tty my english and my pronunciation are?
In lyrics I have made some "shortcuts" to make them fit music better. Do you think they make the grammar too bad?
Cheers,
Jani
Here are the lyrics:
WILD GIRL
She's an angry alligator
photographic devastator
You don't seem to mind she's acting crazy
Acting like a true beliver
You are saying I am lying
If you're thinking I would want her
You'd better think that one over
chorus:
You really think she can be taken?
You believe that you can tame her
Make the wild girl fit your little
dream world
Who is the one that you trust?
Is it me or the one that you lust?
When I tell you she's just bad news
You are saying I am jealous
Stay away that girl
She's one deadly fandango
She's only laughing at your feelings