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Cut You Loose - Ashes for Dreams
ScottLevi:
Hey y'all!
Read the lyrics first, and they're very cool. Comes across almost spoken-word with how they pull the tempo into short patterns - all the more exciting to hear how they'll sound set to music!
Damn really nice, melody on the first line got me straight away, very classy vocal and melody backed up by the deep driving groove of the guitar really creates a powerful, smokey atmosphere.
Great buildup and and momentum management overall, love the powerful entries of lines line "Fragments of you scatter all around".
Not much constructive from me here, great track!
Cheers,
Scott.
macker71165:
Very nice tune nice production and love your vocals
mickyplankton:
Quality Collab. The performance and production are excellent. Like Adam I felt it could have been a bit faster. I did find the flow of the vocal delivery contrasts well with the instrumentation although slightly at times I was wishing the vocal delivery would be sped up. The drums are top notch.
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