Whato @Mikek - Dig the beard...
I really like the lyrics.
First I was was caught a bit off guard with the opening American accent, then it kind of wore off making me concentrating on whether you'll be singing in American or Uk English (We both know), I know that you are from OK, but it's just a
Really like the 'but this' placement
The gaps between the 'I still want you', and 'Oh I do' maybe be a bit long. the 'Oh' sounded a bit forced, maybe don't push it as much, it's the same with the crescendo near the end, don't push it so much, it'll sound better, it's a very passionate song but you have to keep it together
Yeah, nice sad song
Do you think she will walk through that door Mike? and what is the guitar? btw I really like the forlorn loop...is that your own? sounds cool.
hope this helps Mike
cpm