Hey Rightly
Great lyrics. They're dark and intriguing and each time I read them I look for a different meaning. Unfortunately, for me, your ideas are too clever and there's no way I'll be able to give any constructive feedback! (...I probably shouldn't have started that last sentence with unfortunately, sorry! as I meant that as a positive not a negative...)
I look forward to hearing the music! If there's any parts you are not happy with then let me know and I will happily help but they look good to go for me. The stronger songwriters might be more enlightening.
I always read your lyrics with interest, I find they just draw me in.
Cheers
Hi
@Darren1664 You're one of my favourite artists here!
I made small changes to the lyrics.
And I've made massive progress on the music. It's been truly exhausting.
Still way off finished because I want it to be one of my very best.
Its great on acoustic guitar.
Theres only so much active listening I can do in one session, so I've had to take a day off.
I cant wait to have it finished.
I'll post the new lyrics.
All the best!