[Jane99]

HI:) so this is the full lyric of someday is today hope you like it
in this song are actually all the things in i wanna do someday

i remember our talk all too well
i was wishing going to nashville, seeing the georgia sky
you asked: do you think you'll ever gonna make it
i shuck my head probably not
you got up why not my dear
someday is today

I've never been to Nashville
I've never seen the Georgia sky
I never drova a dirt road
but i guess it's time to try
someday i'll be leaving
that someday is today

we sat at your front porch with a cold beer
i was wishing to drive a chevy, seeing luke bryan live
you ask: do you think you'll ever gonna leave
i shuck my head probably not
you got up why not my dear
someday is today
 
I've never drove a chevy, I've never seen Luke bryan live
I never drove a dirt road
but I guess it's time to try
someday i'll be leaving
that someday is today

You gotta let go so you can hold on to your fairytale
don't be scared of falling
you gotta be falling so you know if you can fly
fly fly away
someday
someday is today

[Gallowglass]

I'll do a proper review, I just need to ask: are you a native English speaker? If not, I can help you with grammar and spelling without feeling like a douchecanoe 

[Jane99]

no i'm not a native speaker I'm learning english since 5 years i think

[Gallowglass]

Okay I can do this

i shook my head probably not

you asked: do you think you're [you are] ever gonna make it

As for the song, I liked the message. The same with Snowman's, it's good to see an actual message in a song rather than 'you're perfect' or 'dance' or 'woo cocaine.' One that's honest with potentially-young listeners about the lessons of life but still optimistic.

In the verses, I like how the last line doesn't rhyme. Some people might point this out as a problem, but I think it only emphasises the last line and the decision, and that's central to the song's point. You probably don't need the word 'cold' in about the beer, though that depends on the meter and you know more about that than me so I can't really call that a problem. Other than that, it's completely fine

[Jane99]

thank you very much!

[Gallowglass]

Se do bheatha _{(Gaidhlig for 'you're welcome')}

[mickeytwonames]

Good work