Hi guys, I haven't posted any lyrics for quite awhile, so I thought I'd post these for some feedback
I've been working on them off and on for awhile, but not sure if they're working
I'll get to reviewing other lyrics asap
CS
Imposters at the WheelSwords of injustice pierce the truth
The seeker’s impatient, while others aloof
But you and I swirl through the sky
Like rebel clouds, we dare to defy!
A little bird with a broken wing
Cries in pain as it tries to sing
But its plea-full song goes unheard
As it battles the eagles defiant words!
Oh Apollo, oh Hercules
What kind of Gods can you be?
We’re down on bended knee
Please release us, and set us free
Most bow in reverence, as they walk by
But you and I have seen inside
And we know too well the weakness there
So the Gods they punish, so unfair
Dripping brass and peeling paint
Star-crossed lovers await their fate
In a sea of weeping grass
They cannot believe, and they dare not ask
Oh Apollo, oh Hercules
What kind of Gods can you be?
Can you cry, can you weep?
How can you love, if you can’t see?
Shattered glass on a lonely beach
Where crooked branches fail to reach
A beating heart in a boat adrift
The hourglass sands begin to shift
Under angels’ wings, their darkness hides
In shadows of fear, their heart resides
Can these Gods that have no vice
Learn to feel, learn to fight
Oh Apollo, oh Hercules
What kind of Gods can you be?
Imposters at the wheel
How many fates, do you seal?