[QuietRamen]

Here you go. This ones a bit.. y'know. But yeah. TAKE IT AND RUNNNN WITH IT. Or something.

I have just one thought,
Will I end myself?
And its just that thought,
Will I end myself?

Am I holy, or unholy?
While day breaks.
Why are we punished
For the choices we make?
And which way
Will be the path I take?
Because tonight
Comes my never ending fate.

Everything I was taught
Turned out to be wrong.
Everyone said
"You know, you gotta be strong."
I tried to stay in the light
Tried to love.
But as the dawn moved on
It faded away.

Am I holy, or unholy?
Now the day breaks.
Why are we punished
For opinions we make?
And which way
Will be the path I take?
Because in the end
We all have the same fate.

[Sellon]

This is brilliant man, I really like this, you've really captured me, I can relate pretty well, I especially like the chorus, I'd love to see more of your stuff like this

[ariel-manto]

great piece and also a deep meaning!
I can relate to it as well, especially this part:

Everything I was taught
Turned out to be wrong.
Everyone said
"You know, you gotta be strong."

exactly.

[Nathankeirbond]

Brilliant! Really enjoyed reading this. Especially the last verse!